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My mind — bluish wobbly-dizzy;
An excruciating numbness
sojourn in my brain
A nightmare? – I thought…
More pragmatic
than an anarchistic dream
A nihilistic delusion
A fabricated illusion;
My mind pugnaciously conscious
hops between the idealistic realism
and exaggerated emotional surrealism
I couldn’t intellect my pate…
This perpetual intolerable pain
inside my brain, which I couldn’t feel
Is mind inside or outside?
I relentlessly hear the sound of void
empty rhythms…
No I don’t hear; or do I?
am i breathing?
I dont feel the oxygen
Aaaaahhhhh………
The debility to sense my sense
The disability to move my body
Unconditionally paralyse me;
I think I am dead
but am still inside me
I hear people scream
empty void agonies;
I long to tell them I am alive
But I ain’t alive
I still luminously ruminate,
My memories spins akin
infinitesimal cosmic debris
Blue platelets, Fat blue globules
White hormones, blue lymphocytes;
Where are they?
What are they?
physical dimension of memories?
I could touch them
feel them disintegrate
into light particles
F***, I am cautiously defragmented
I am being elastically compressed
Where am I?
quirkygalblog said:
Hey.. that was awesome piece bcz … you really scared me!!! Nice work!
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OrangeDilip said:
There will be a total of 5 chapters in this series, I would love you to read them as well to have a clear understanding.. Thanks
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quirkygalblog said:
Thanks for the tip! Will surely take time out for that !
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OrangeDilip said:
Thank u!
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quotesandmore (Chitra) said:
you described death so well.. being alive!!!!
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OrangeDilip said:
Yes I am still alive 😁
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quotesandmore (Chitra) said:
whew.. glad to know that 🙂
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Ananya Sharma. said:
P O W E R F U L.
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OrangeDilip said:
Thanks a lot.. 🙂 was missing your comments!
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Ananya Sharma. said:
You’ll get a lot now. So many that they may suffocate you. (I’m never in the middle) 😛
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OrangeDilip said:
I know … I know🤗🤗
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Anand Bose said:
You have garnered the core of existential philosophy in this beautiful poem. Anand Bose from Kerala
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OrangeDilip said:
Thanks a lot sir, wish you read the next 2 parts of the poetry as well. Appreciate your comments.
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